[09:31] <sladen> http://fridge.ubuntu.com/node/560
[09:32] <sladen> nixternal: whiprush imbrandon Seveas ^^
[09:32] <sladen> needs editing/checking
[09:32] <Seveas> sladen, /me has no editing privileges
[09:34] <whiprush> sladen: on it!
[09:34] <whiprush> hahah, that picture is awesome
[09:37] <whiprush> i think if you replace SABDFL with sabdfl that the cms will do that neat acronym substitution with a hover definition.
[09:41] <sladen> whiprush: go for it
[09:41] <whiprush> k
[09:41] <sladen> and any other changes
[09:41] <whiprush> some typos and stuff
[09:41] <whiprush> give me a few
[09:41] <sladen> I've been starring at it for hours and I don't want to look at it any more :)
[09:42] <sladen> maybe a better title too
[09:42] <sladen> and some subject
[09:42] <sladen> and some subject headings like I used for the upstart piece
[09:43] <sladen> please, quite pleased with the photo
[09:44] <sladen> original was http://www.firstafricaninspace.com/images/gallery/4806.jpg
[09:44] <whiprush> let me try to do some headers
[09:48] <whiprush> sladen: ok, what do you think of those 2 headings?
[09:48] <sladen> excellent!
[09:48] <whiprush> you're right though
[09:49] <whiprush> needs a new title
[09:49] <sladen> I reckon a couple of 2-3 <strong>highlights</strong> from the text would focus the eye too
[09:49] <sladen> it did get /rather/ long
[09:49] <whiprush> I think it's awesome though
[09:49] <whiprush> I didn't know any of that stuff
[09:50] <sladen> mmm, thinking I have some more bits about the 2Mb Ku-Band net connection to Houston (...when it's up)
[09:51] <sladen> and how they installed a VoIP client on it
[09:51] <whiprush> haha
[09:51] <whiprush> I am brainstorming on a pad and I wrote down "Soyuz think you're a road warrior?"
[09:51] <sladen> can you <strong>if it worked then they would have two new laptops</strong>
[09:51] <whiprush> sure
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[09:52] <sladen> try:  <strong>almost anyway</strong>.  instead of the italics and preview it
[09:52] <whiprush> ok
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[09:53] <whiprush> easy easy
[09:54] <whiprush> I think that's too many
[09:54] <whiprush> look at it now
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[09:55] <whiprush> I am going to try "...almost anyways"
[09:55] <whiprush> see how that reads
[09:55] <sladen> there's too much bold "on orbit that were much faster than anything else up there."
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[09:56] <sladen> it's just little bits to help the eye pick out interesting snippets and break the text up
[09:56] <whiprush> how about now?
[09:56] <sladen> actually skip the whole of that long piece and just have  <strong>much faster</strong>
[09:56] <whiprush> hmmm, "if" looks weird
[09:57] <sladen> nod
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[09:57] <whiprush> how about now?
[09:57] <sladen> can I try some edits?
[09:58] <whiprush> go ahead
[09:58] <whiprush> stepping out for food, I'll be back in 10
[09:59] <sladen> nod
[10:33] <sladen> what's the word for when people are happy
[10:33] <sladen> sounds a bit like morality
[11:24] <sladen> whiprush: ^^ try now
[11:26] <sladen> 1500 words
[11:26] <sladen> naach
[11:28] <whiprush> ok
[11:29] <whiprush> oh man, the soyuz thing was a joke.
[11:29] <whiprush> I didn't actually expect you to use it
[11:31] <whiprush> that voip story is awesome
[11:33] <whiprush> want me to publish it now?
[11:38] <sladen> can you check. the. VoIP. section.
[11:38] <sladen> (eg. read it slowly one-word at a time)
[11:38] <sladen> I tend to miss small words out
[11:38] <sladen> and your and my brain will probably tend to fill them in automatically, even if they're still missing :)
[12:00] <sladen> whiprush: yup, go for it if you didn't find anything
[12:00] <sladen> whiprush: I don't want it to get any longer... :)