[14:52] -SwissBot:#ubuntu-news- ::OMG!Ubuntu:: Linux Release Roundup: VLC, Wireshark, Tidal CLI + More @ https://www.omgubuntu.co.uk/?p=134941 (by Joey Sneddon)
[20:42] <Bashing-om> Working on the WIKI ATT . Back to it soonest I clear my desk .
[21:54] <Bashing-om> And I present UWN543 for inspection and advisements :) Pending is removal of "WIP" .
[21:58] <krytarik> Bashing-om: Since I've got no notifications about any further comments in the Google Doc yet though, did you address the remaining ones pertaining two of your summaries then?
[22:11] <Bashing-om> krytarik: Yepper . See now what you think :)
[22:15] -SwissBot:#ubuntu-news- ::Planet:: Jeremy Bicha: GNOME Tweaks 3.30 @ https://jeremy.bicha.net/2018/09/02/gnome-tweaks-3-30/
[22:32] <krytarik> Bashing-om: On the Minimal Ubuntu one, too many "He ..." in a row for my taste, I wouldn't call it "new operating system" but maybe "new variant", there is a double space right after "is" there, and a space on the otherwise empty line above the link.  On the Nautilus one, the post literally talks about "there is an alternative", but you still refer to two - the second one having been the ...
[22:32] <krytarik> ... workaround to use version 3.30 with desktop icon support.
[22:35] <krytarik> Oh, on scrolling through the whole thing, I just noticed under "Further News" we should update the "https://insights.ubuntu.com/" link to "https://blog.ubuntu.com/" too - also in the template.
[22:44] <krytarik> Bashing-om: "because 3.26 supports desktop icons" - and I'd insert a "still" there.
[22:45] <Bashing-om> krytarik: Sounds reasonable to me :P
[22:46] <krytarik> (Also, I did mean to mention the one alternative specificially, which is through Flatpak - but I'm fine without it too.)
[22:48] <krytarik> "18.10 ships" - I'd say "will ship" there.
[22:50] <Bashing-om> krytarik: Rewording the Nautilus summary now :)
[22:51] <krytarik> And I'd add a comma in these two places: "In a glowing review of the Ubuntu ecosystem, Twain Taylor debuts Minimal Ubuntu." and what is currently "Though 18.10 ships without the enhancements in Nautilus 3.30, Joey tells of two possible alternatives."
[22:53] <krytarik> That's all though, otherwise looks fine. :)
[23:38] <Bashing-om> krytarik: OK all Done - I Think. see now what you think . (lot's of interruptions here )