[21:04] <Bashing-om> UWN554: "Think" I got it . please critique and proof read.  onfirm that "In This Issue" is correct (?) .
[21:05] <Bashing-om> confirm*
[21:10] <krytarik> Yeah, it's correct.  However, I noticed that 1.) you started to flout my earlier statement that we don't use the Cloud section currently, and 2.) even then <https://blog.ubuntu.com/2018/11/14/innovating-toward-safety-computer-controlled-aerial-robotic-systems> doesn't seem to belong there either.
[21:14] <Bashing-om> krytarik: Not flouting .. Got my wires crossed .. between what belongs where .. "Canonical News:" -> blog.canonical.com always goes here ?
[21:14] <krytarik> ..Oh, but you got an erroneous empty line between the Updates item in the list and Much More.
[21:15] <krytarik> That was the plan, yes.
[21:15] <Bashing-om> See what I can do to fix Canonical News: .
[21:16] <krytarik> Simply change the header in both places. >_>
[21:19] <krytarik> " *  Ubuntu Foundations: Thu, November 22, 4pm – 5pm" - and I spot an extra space after the asterisk there.
[21:21] <krytarik> " * Server Team – 13 November 2018 -  https://blog.ubuntu.com/2018/11/13/ubuntu-server-development-summary-13-november-2018" - in front of the URL here too, but it doesn't matter that much there.
[21:23] <krytarik> "Já sabes: Ouve, subscreve e partilha!" - and I've always left that part off the Ubuntu Portugal podcast summary, you might use Google Translate to see what exactly it means.
[21:24] <krytarik> "[21:27] <krytarik> Huh, that appears to be something else than a usual space in front of the URL there even..
[21:27] <Bashing-om> krytarik: Called myself checking for those spaces.
[21:29] <krytarik> "..library core.  Meanwhile,"There is still work.." - and here is one at the wrong place.
[21:30] <krytarik> "..support  for AMD Ryzen 2 APUs.." - and the last one.
[21:32] <krytarik> "* Mastering the upgrading of OpenStack" - one overlooked camelcase in the Cloud/Canonical section.
[21:42] <krytarik> And it would be nice if we could be consistent in whether normal or "intelligent" quotes are used.
[21:53] <Bashing-om> krytarik: Never claimed to be a word smith . Just try to do it :P .. I looked again at the Mir summary . I do not see that I want to change " continues his work on the Mir graphics stack core to maintain compatibility with the Mir library core.  Meanwhile,"There is still work that needs to be done porting the Android platform Ubuntu Touch runs on."; - as to me that is all one clause .
[21:59] <krytarik> There is an extra space before, but one missing after "Meanwhile,"
[22:02] <Bashing-om> looking again :P
[22:04] <Bashing-om> Awhhh ! got it !
[22:12] <Bashing-om> guiverc: Proof reading UWN554, many errors has krytarik spotted .. care to also give it a close look over ?
[23:43] -SwissBot:#ubuntu-news- ::Planet:: Tiago Carrondo: S01E11 â Alta Coltura @ https://podcastubuntuportugal.org/2018/11/18/s01e11-alta-coltura/