Bashing-om | UWN: Issue728 up for review and final edits: https://wiki.ubuntu.com/UbuntuWeeklyNewsletter/Issue728 :D | 20:24 |
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krytarik | Bashing-om: "proposed allowlist of GNOME Shell Extensions “ - with literal quotes, the space before the latter one makes it land on a new line on its own here, and also it's different to the first. | 20:41 |
Bashing-om | krytarik: Ouch - did not notice - fixing ! | 20:42 |
krytarik | And should we maybe combine the two release schedule items into a single one? | 20:45 |
krytarik | Also, one of them currently spells it "Ubuntu K Release schedule" while the other one says "release", which I prefer. | 20:47 |
Bashing-om | krytarik: ack - will make it so :D | 20:48 |
krytarik | I mean could just have a custom header of like "Ubuntu K and L Release Schedules" for them, and the summary text similar. | 20:49 |
krytarik | And then I think it's fine to just list the two URLs after each other, rather than bullet-pointing them. | 20:50 |
krytarik | "to what extensions that Ubuntu will maintain" - I think "that" should be dropped here, also I'd spell it "sublists" | 20:53 |
krytarik | "Provisions are provided for the details of the updates and changes." - wouldn't it be better to just write "Details are provided about..." here? | 20:55 |
krytarik | Because I'm not sure I grasp the meaning of the current wording of it. | 20:55 |
Bashing-om | krytarik: Working ^ :D | 20:59 |
krytarik | "honorable mentions are displayed" - I'd say "given" here, and also "on [the] Ubuntu 22.04 LTS [image]" | 21:02 |
Bashing-om | UWN: Updated edits - see now what else remains. | 21:10 |
Bashing-om | Away for a bit :( | 21:49 |
Bashing-om | Back in editing mode. | 22:43 |
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