[20:24] <Bashing-om> UWN: Issue728 up for review and final edits: https://wiki.ubuntu.com/UbuntuWeeklyNewsletter/Issue728 :D
[20:41] <krytarik> Bashing-om: "proposed allowlist of GNOME Shell Extensions “ - with literal quotes, the space before the latter one makes it land on a new line on its own here, and also it's different to the first.
[20:42] <Bashing-om> krytarik: Ouch - did not notice - fixing !
[20:45] <krytarik> And should we maybe combine the two release schedule items into a single one?
[20:47] <krytarik> Also, one of them currently spells it "Ubuntu K Release schedule" while the other one says "release", which I prefer.
[20:48] <Bashing-om> krytarik: ack - will make it so :D
[20:49] <krytarik> I mean could just have a custom header of like "Ubuntu K and L Release Schedules" for them, and the summary text similar.
[20:50] <krytarik> And then I think it's fine to just list the two URLs after each other, rather than bullet-pointing them.
[20:53] <krytarik> "to what extensions that Ubuntu will maintain" - I think "that" should be dropped here, also I'd spell it "sublists"
[20:55] <krytarik> "Provisions are provided for the details of the updates and changes." - wouldn't it be better to just write "Details are provided about..." here?
[20:55] <krytarik> Because I'm not sure I grasp the meaning of the current wording of it.
[20:59] <Bashing-om> krytarik: Working ^ :D
[21:02] <krytarik> "honorable mentions are displayed" - I'd say "given" here, and also "on [the] Ubuntu 22.04 LTS [image]"
[21:10] <Bashing-om> UWN: Updated edits - see now what else remains.
[21:49] <Bashing-om> Away for a bit :(
[22:43] <Bashing-om> Back in editing mode.