[02:32] <guiverc> Bashing-om, apparmor one..  " in the -proposed repository"   should we have single-quotes around '-proposed' ?   (I don't normally; but in english I fear it reads awkwardly as is)
[02:37] <guiverc> netplan 1.1... "which is available on GitHub will be deployed into Debian and Ubuntu. "   We need a "and" before I feel; "on GitHub, and will be"  (comma not sure will be needed)
[02:39] <guiverc> same netplan.. drop 'and' maybe in "commits, and listed highlights of"  
[02:40] <guiverc> :)   there is quotes on 'proposed' in WebDav summary; maybe drop the "-" from "-proposed" in earlier mention so summaries are ~consistent
[02:41] <Bashing-om> guiverc: apparmour: way the original article writes it.
[02:41] <guiverc> as we're not quoting I'd rather us be consistent (uwn)
[02:42] <Bashing-om> looking and fixing.
[02:43] <guiverc> as always; do what you think (I'm expressing my current view... don't mean it'll remain;   I balked somewhat when I read 'pursuant', but I think it was me that typed that..)
[02:45] <guiverc> AMDVLK one, "tuning,and fixes"   looks like needs a space after ","
[02:46]  * guiverc zoning out a bit.. one of my favorite music pieces is playing.... :)
[02:52] <guiverc> finished read thru... ^ all i noted worthy of comment; looks good
[02:52] <guiverc> (some of ^ are likley very petty)
[02:56] <Bashing-om> guiverc: We aim for perfection --- any dupes tbis issue in the updates sections ?
[02:58] <guiverc> I didn't notice any
[02:58] <guiverc> 12 august the oldest is all I recall .. nothing unexpected at all in my scan
[02:59] <Bashing-om> saving what is then :D
[03:00] <guiverc> (12 aug may not mean anything to you, but each of focal,jammy,noble first listed was 12-aug, often there is one that's a day out etc.. - all starting same day makes sense, but that grabbed me thus ^ mention)
[03:03] <Bashing-om> guiverc: Saved and out - did a rewrite for ^ // see that you approve, // 12Aug was on a Monday - Good that as we start the week on a Sundsy UTC.
[03:08] <guiverc> looks great thanks Bashing-om 
[03:09] <Bashing-om> guiverc: Great because of the results of your sharp eyes - thanks !
[14:20] -ubottu:#ubuntu-news- ::omg!ubuntu:: A Newer, Cheaper Raspberry Pi 5 is Available @ https://www.omgubuntu.co.uk/2024/08/newer-cheaper-raspberry-pi-5-2gb-ram
[19:35] <Bashing-om> UWN: Opening 853 - Pulling WIP/Comments/WIKI - add news tag // Will start the push soonest.
[20:08] <Bashing-om> UWN: M/L is away - Doing the Forums posting next.
[20:29] <Bashing-om> UWN: Forums posting completed - Doing a Mastodon blog next.
[21:07] <Bashing-om> UWN: Mastodon done - setting up 854 next.
[21:28] <Bashing-om> UWN: 854 inching off the line :D
[23:11]  * Bashing-om Away for a bit to do battle with the grass.
[23:28] <guiverc> https://fridge.ubuntu.com/2024/08/19/ubuntu-weekly-newsletter-issue-853/
[23:32] <guiverc> shared telegram, twitter, (mewe)
[23:48] <Bashing-om> eyes back on - Green machine winning the battle :P